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SIX
TRAITS OF WRITING
  
Copper Ridge teachers have a tool called the
‘6 Traits of Writing’ that is used to help
all writers improve their skills. The 6
Traits are ideas, organization, Voice, Word
Choice, Sentence Fluency, and Conventions.
Each trait can be scored on a scale from 1
to 6 with 4 being our benchmark.
There are three advantages to having
this tool. First, it provides a language
teachers, students and parents can use to
talk about a piece of writing. For example,
if the writing seems flat or uninteresting,
6 Traits gives you the language to help the
writer specifically focus in on that trait.
You might talk to the child about word
choice or voice. In this sense, the 6
Traits is a teaching tool. Second, the 6
Traits is an assessment tool. Our District
writing Benchmarks for grades 1 through 5
and the AIMS writing tests for 3rd,
4th, and 5th grades
are all scored using the 6 Trait point
scale. Teachers and students will also
score papers using this scale. For teaching
and learning purposes most writing will
typically be scored for only one trait.
Lastly, it is a tool that students can use
to develop self-directed learning. Using
the 6 Traits students take control over
improving their writing because of the
feedback the rubric provides.
Copper Ridge teachers understand the
value of your support and assistance of the
work we do on a daily basis. The language
of 6 Traits is the bridge we provide for our
children to cross over from initial
tentative ideas to powerful and meaningful
writing.
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IDEAS
Makes sense
Narrow,
manageable topic
Sounds like
writer knows the topic well
Fresh Spin
Important details
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ORGANIZATION
Inviting lead
Purposeful
sequencing
Elaboration
remains “centered”
Fun to predict,
but some surprises, too!
Doesn’t just stop
No “dream”
endings
No redundant
summaries
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VOICE
Sounds like a person wrote it
Sounds like this
writer and no one else
Brings topic to
life
Punch, flair,
style, courage
Makes you feel
something
Sense of
involvement
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WORD CHOICE
Memorable moments
Strong verbs
Vivid images
“Just right”
words and phrases
Simple language
used as well
Minimal
redundancy
Minimal slang,
jargon, inflated language
Not just correct
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SENTENCE FLUENCY
Easy to
read aloud
Varied sentence
length
Varied,
purposeful sentence
beginnings . .
. Now,
After a
while, Because
of this, As a
result,
Nevertheless, However,
Consequently,
Therefore, . . .
Rhythm, cadence |
CONVENTIONS
Looks
clean, edited and polished
Most
things done correctly
Easy to decode,
decipher, comprehend, and follow
No big, glaring
errors
Easy to focus on
ideas, voice, organization
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6 TRAITS OF
WRITING POINT SCALE
Each of the 6 Traits can be scored for all
grade levels and all types of writing using
the
following 6 point scale:
SCORING
SCALE POINT DESCRIPTORS:
6
Exemplary:
Writing at this level is both
exceptional and memorable. It shows
distinction and sophisticated
application
of knowledge and skills.
5
Strong:
Writing at this level exceeds
the standard. It shows a thorough and
effective application of skills and
knowledge.
4
Proficient:
Writing at this level MEETS
THE STANDARD. It is acceptable and
demonstrates application of essential
skills. Minor errors or omissions do not
detract from the overall quality of the
work.
3
Developing:
Writing at this level does
not yet meet the standard. It shows basic,
but inconsistent application of
knowledge and skills. Work has minor errors
or omissions that detract from the overall
quality. It needs further development.
2
Emerging:
Writing at this level shows a partial
application of knowledge and skills. It is
typically superficial,
fragmented or incomplete and needs
considerable development before reflecting
the proficient level. Work at this level
may
contain many errors or omissions.
1
Beginning:
The writing shows little
application of knowledge and skills. Work
at this level contains many errors and
omissions.

SUCCESSFUL WAYS TO TALK TO
YOUR CHILD ABOUT A PIECE OF
WRITING
Let the writer hold the
pencil.
Keep the writing conference
short.
Respond to the CONTENT
first. Respond as though you were reading a
postcard from a friend.
Let the child do MOST of the
talking.
Encourage the student to read
the writing out loud.
Help your child learn the
language of a writer by commenting on the
paper using the 6 Traits.
Resist thinking for the
writer. Let the writer make decisions about
what to do next. Resist the urge to fix the
writing. Revision means the writer is
seeing the writing again to determine if the
writing says what the writer intended.
Focus on conventions
(editing) at a different time, not when you
are talking about content.
In editing conferences, let
the writer take the lead, hold the pencil,
guide the conference and ask questions.
Start by having the writer tell you what
needs to be corrected. If you correct
editing, the student misses the opportunity
to learn.
Be cautious about praise. Be
specific about what parts of the writing
work well. Use the 6 Trait language when
you comment on the paper’s strengths. Too
much praise can discourage a writer.
In addition:
Read often and broadly. Read
poems, stories, news articles and messages
together with the student. We all learn by
example
Share your own writing and
the joys and frustrations you encountered
when trying to express yourself.
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